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"OUR Gettysburg" is an original musical about the Battle of Gettysburg. It begins with Elizabeth Thorn offering her version of events, countering Lincoln's G...

Comment by waldopaper on April 19, 2014 at 12:43pm

Blimey crackers.  Alan Hostetter nailed it!  Ordinarily we wood grumble and bitch cos somebody else got "our" idea.  Not this time.  This be a boost up the ladder, ladies and germs.  "Here you find a profile of personalities... who struggle with dreams... and realities..." yepperdoo.  Do dogs have souls?  The consensus was they do not.  Well just look in their eyes and you can fuggin well SEE it, ye goddam twits.  A horse eye was more diplomatic than that. 

We is dot murmuration finger cloud toward a roosting tree.  Or wire.  Whatever.  Human alarm clock standing tipsy toe in crib give peace a chance.  Do data dance.  What else is a meta for?  We have no pants!  

Comment by pan on April 19, 2014 at 11:48pm

There definitely are some things about the style that remind me a bit of you.  However, I gotta say that I prefer the density of your references and the complexity of your rhyme/meter structures to Hostetter.  Alan Hostetter is good but he ain't no G.B. Waldschmidt.

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